Hawaii Alt-0 – Hawaii Five 0 Alternative Universe


As you probably already know, Hawaii Five 0 is on break until March 31 to make room for March Madness on CBS. Since we won’t be having our regular episode related posts during that time we thought we would provide you with a little something different.

Bryna who is one of our  weekly fanart contributors,  wrote a short fanfic that she has provided us to share with you. Instead of sharing it on the sites of archive of your own or fanfiction.net, she  asked us to release it here. If you are unfamiliar with fan fiction it is best described as below from Wikipedia.


Fan fiction or fanfiction (also abbreviated to fan fic, fanfic, or fic) is fiction about characters or settings from an original work of fiction, created by fans of that work rather than by its creator. It is a popular form of fan labor, particularly since the advent of the Internet.


Since it is fiction and it is considered a form of art it can include many different concepts and ships with the foundation of the regular characters. It is NOT real so take it for just that: FICTION.

We will release Bryna’s story which includes Alex’s characters of both Steve McGarrett and Mick St. John in five different parts starting today. Each of them are short but you will need to read each chapter in succession to understand her concept at the end. All fanart is also done by Bryna.


Hope you enjoy it and it helps, even if just a little, fill the void between new episodes.


Hawaii Five 0 meets Mick St John



McGarrett’s head was pounding, he felt disoriented, and he couldn’t keep his eyes open. He finally succumbed to the darkness.


Chapter 1


Mick St. John’s phone’s ringer pierced the silence. He jolts from his sleep and grabs for the phone. Before he could say anything, he hears a concerned voice on the other end of the line, “Queen’s Medical Center…get down here..NOW!”


Mick arrives at Queen’s in record time. He jumps out of the car and runs through the Emergency entrance. He sees Duke first, “Where’s Danno?”. Duke nods, “In Room 141.”


Mick picks up his stride weaving in and out of busy doctors, nurses and EMT workers. He sees Kono and Grover as he reaches Room 141. Kono shakes her head in disbelief. Grover points to the room, “Man you’re never gonna believe it.”


Mick swings open the door and sees Danielle “Danno” Mauro sitting at the head of the bed holding onto the railing. She was in deep thought as she held onto the patient’s hand. The patient was battered with bandages on his head and around his right shoulder.


Danno turns towards him, “What took you so long?”


Mick looks in disbelief, “What?”


Danno turns towards the patient, “I thought he was you, Mick.”


Mick walks over to the bed near Danno. They both look at the patient intently. He was a spitting image of Mick St John, except he had short hair and a few tattoos.


Danno looks up at Mick, “He was found near the Pali Lookout Trail by some tourists who were lost. No ID. He was shot in the shoulder and a bullet grazed his head. He had some internal injuries as well. Max said he was dumped there three days ago.


Mick walks around to the other side of the bed, “It’s amazing he survived.”


Danno gently touches the victim’s shoulder, “He apparently dressed his wound which slowed down the bleeding. He also wrapped his head with a portion of his shirt before he passed out. Max said if anyone else was left out there in this condition, they would not have made it.”


Mick leans close to the victim.


Danno looks at Mick, “So, do you have a twin brother that we don’t know about?”


Mick shakes his head, “No Danno…you know it’s only me and Mary.”


Danno sighs, “The doc says this guy should wake up soon.” She sits back in her chair. “All we can do is wait.”


Mick nods, “Keep watch on this guy. From the looks of things, he is a hot target. I’ll have Kono relieve you in a few hours. In the meantime, Grover and I will head to the crime scene. Hopefully we can find out what happened.”


Stay tuned for Chapter 2



Story and Pic Credit Becoming_Bryna

Adapted from the CBS characters of Hawaii Five 0 and Moonlight








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  1. Excellent start Bryna!

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      Thank you, Jilly!!!

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